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Second Creative Writing

Writer's picture: Sophia BotSophia Bot

Updated: Nov 7, 2024

The air is thick, metallic, and damp. The smell of gunpowder filled my lungs, the taste of sulphur lining my throat and irritating my red, tired eyes. Bang! I blinked. I rubbed my face with my calloused hands, their rough texture scraping against my face’s soot covered surface. Bang! I could feel the sweat oozing from my pores; it trickled its way into the gaping blisters that adorned my body. I looked up. I carefully peaked my shielded head above the deep, murky trenches. No Man’s Land. Bang! I ducked. Leaning back, I stumbled into the depths of the muddy swamp I would call home for the next month. I reach for my worn, bent rifle. Where is It? “Oh.” I grab bullets. One… Two… I counted out enough rounds to keep me and my men safe for at least a few minutes. Three… Bang! 

“Duck!” I hear him exclaim. Duck. I took a knee. Flattening my body into the bloody fluid. I could taste it: Metallic, rocklike, and sickening. Bang! Smoke towered into the murky skies. Bang! I stood up. My tired rifle threw itself into my hands as I leaned against the rotting planks of wood we've placed to fortify the weak muddy walls.

“Down!” I feel a hand pull at my ragged uniform. I pull away. 

“Down!” Bang! Bang! Bang! I hold my finger firmly on the trigger. The yelling became louder, thicker, deeper. Bang! I could barely see where I was shooting. Bang! I felt blind, my view blocked by bodies. Who? Him. 

“Duck!” I remembered. He didn’t. Bang! Bang! I could hear the clash of steel bullets against cast-iron tank walls. 


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